rawr
I don't really know what to think. You seem to be having some time sig problems which is strange considering how straight forward the rhythm is. The drums came in a little too soon right at the beginning. It really threw me off and made it hard to get into the track.
I can't bring myself to really judge this track because it sounds really unfinished and rough. It's not bad, but it deffinatly needs more work. Keep at it.