Not bad for a first attempt

For a first attempt at an orchesrated piece, this really isn't bad. Some things that you should work on in this pice are thus:
1. Though you had many diverse elements in the song, they did not seem to work together as they should. Except in very special instances, orchestral pieces tend to harmonize their sounds together. The beginning of the piece is quite good in this regard, but later, when the heavy snare drum comes in, the harmony starts to fall off.
2. A little heavy with the precussion. Throughout much of the song, the precussion tends to domanate all the other sounds. While this can be a good thing in some types of music, like military marches, in this piece, it seems to steal the attention away from the brass and woodwinds section. I think that the song would be a little more enjoyable if you cut back on the drums a tad.
3. The last thing is just a personal note. I find that orchestrated pieces are somewhat more enjoyable when you pick a certain type of instrument or a certain section to hold the lead through the whole song with the others working to support it.
Other than that, I would say that this is a good start, but that it needs a little more work to be perfect. Keep working on it and you will be great at this.

good

One of your best pieces so far i thought, ive got gripes with the drums (i think its a snare?), but im beggining to think its simply me not liking them now instead of your talent with them.

Good work and keep on trying.

A new road and so a new future.

Oi! :)

So you did enter, not with a custom submission but with a cool one none the less. For a first try at a classical piece this is really good. I can imagen this one in a RPG like game like "secret of mana" or something like that.

I wouldn't say that it could fit well as a tankmen theme, since it's more like a funny animation but Utah has the final word as a judge. :)

It's emotionpacked and sad. Hence the title! :) As suggested I would stick with classic if I were you. Good job and good luck!

Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE_555! You voted 5 for The Fall and Rise of a Hero, raising its score from 4.00 to 4.09.

cool!

awesome intro, but the next part was totally different...not that thats bad or anything...wow! this is really cool. i liked the snare especially because it was really different from other snare parts. it definitely pushed the piece forward...

brass was awesome...i play the horn and there werer some awesome chords in there.

wat instrument was that in the beginning! idk wat is sounded like...

i also liked that flute in the backround with the trill type stuff

th melodies were also really cool and the backround vox were cool, but i only heard them once or twice

awesome piece and u shouldnt stop the classical dude!

So nice to hear this music!

I love this music, it sounds so interesting.
It sounds a bit Roman...well good job!
I hope you'll be making something like this again...i dont think there is anything wrong with the sound or anything at all :}

Keep up the great work!