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GameSmashDash

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Lore writing Feedback Jun 10, 2023

https://monstersmutationsandmomsters.blogspot.com/2023/06/drakeith-lore.html

I know it's bad but keep in mind I wrote this in less than an hour; I need to improve at writing, so please give me feedback if you can.

Also, keep in mind I'm using Grammarly, which is a hit or miss right now when it comes to tone.

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XwaynecoltX

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Response to Lore writing Feedback Jul 8, 2023

I think it's actually pretty good more depth but overall pretty good

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GameSmashDash

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Response to Lore writing Feedback Jul 8, 2023

At 7/8/23 01:55 AM, XwaynecoltX wrote:I think it's actually pretty good more depth but overall pretty good

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I forgot I even made this post; sorry about that, I got rid of it because grammarly was being useless.

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