great
good idea, could really be great if there were more ways to die than one, and more than just a car chase, possibly good graphics and develop a back story possibly, hope you find this useful, keep up the good work
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This is a remake of my previous submition the car journey. it has more to it!. the storey is about our the main character "steve" on his way home, and he runs into a spot of trouble! u can help guide him and choose how to solve his problem! happy watching. check out the difference between the old car journey and this one. anyways hope u enjoy, your reviews will be helpful for future flash making!
i may make a sequel to this if ppl think its good enought for one.
i want lots and lots of reviews plez...need to see what improvments and ideas people can give me to make my flash creation half decent!
update - i am now under way in making a story board for "The Car Journey 2" im gonna put hella effort into the next one so i can get a decent newgrounds score for once in my life :D
- Mark :D
interesting ;-)
Quite a site to behold, just work on the graphics and it would be perfect.
Car trouble anyone?
This was much better than the first edition, this redone one, even though better than the last, isn't top notch, another episode wouldn't hurt and people who watched it, i'm sure, wuld like to se the ending. Thumbs up.
Good Job
This was cool. Better graphics would've made it better though. What was the name of that song. It was hot.
...not bad
i liked the music and stuff but it didnt have any diolouge. it would have been better to add sum more interaction between the 2 characters, not bad tho i liked it im gonna give u a 4
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