One Tip...
Try to make the music and the movie sync. Otherwise, everything you said!
Author Comments
hehe I think this is an ok movie... besides, its been a while since I contributed a movie to newgrounds... the movie is about a 'guy' who's on a little fieldtrip. But.. then his car breaks down...
Tried to make it 'cartoonystyle' and I think I succeeded. I know I can make the following things better: add colour, make longer, make it look a little better, sound fx.. got more advice? letse hear it.
-serge-
FireHound responds:
Okay :)
LOL hahaha!
This movie reminds me when Im high! lol
FireHound responds:
:)
damn... that was weird!!
hahah! easily the weirdest or most random movie i've ever seen from you, even though there was a story line in there.
heh, well as you said, you could improve greatly on this movie by adding colour, making it longer, etc. but one little tip from me: try to use the whole screen up when animating. if you are going to leave backgrounds and colour out of your movie, you really need to make the main focus of the movie quite large on the screen.
but overall, a really funny little movie, with some excellent animation and a very humorous little song. nice stuff.
overall score: 6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
FireHound responds:
It's a bit crappy... Tried a new style... but it didn't turn out too good...
It has actually a story, but I seemed to suck at making clear wtf was going on.
I'll take notice of your advice in case I ever feel like making something like this again. tnx
that was a cool little movie
I liked it, I think you accomplished the cartoonstyle you speak of. One thing though, the legs when hes running look like a wheel of penii.
FireHound responds:
Oh, you liked it?
Your review makes me happy :)
Good to know you found it to be a cartoonstyle & not just crap.
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A field trip in a car? hmmm. I love stop motion. Not the best in graphics, the music was good, and very upbeat. Keep up the good work, and make more stop motion!
Ryan
FireHound responds:
You've reviewed a lot of my movies, haven't you? Think I should make more? I mean... not many people seem to enjoy it... I guess I would get better if I make more... I shal see. tnx for reviewing again!
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2.85 / 5.00
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