WTF?

This thing just jumps from one thing to another!
What was it al about anyway?

ok

it was ok.needed to be longer

Not bad

Animation needs some work. And the story seems far too dramatic for a Clock movie. It's hard to take an inanimate object with a clock for a face seriously. The Crew should stick to what they're best at...comedy!

Not too keen on the idea of a PaperClock, though it's a much better name that alot of the crap out there. I suggest putting red and blue lines through him, as well as three holds like a sheet of notebook paper. He currently just looks like a sheet of used toilet paper.

Also, you shouldn't motion tween your speech lines. Instead, just make three repeating keyframes in a Movie Clip. Motion Tweened speech lines suck :)

Keep up the good work, but just work on some humor. Subtitles would help, too

Pretty good.

Pretty good for a short, sounds like it will be an interesting story.

Coca-Cola

Frosted Flakes are equally good with Cola.