Nice
Good movement throughout.
The Endind kind of sucked.
Get some friends, let them do some voices and sounds.
Above all, continue the story. Keep 'em coming.
*<}:o) H-D
Author Comments
Don't try to understand just enjoy the action forgive the voiceovers they were all done by the author all sounds came from the author's mouth don't ask.... Send all comments and complaints to mowahaha@yahoo.com Thanks
cool
make a 2nd!! WITH MORE SHOWER SENCES!!
Its good to see it on newgrounds
I finaly convinced shani to submit this to newgrounds well its damn good.
Through there was something i convinced him to fix and it looked like a improvement but now it seems maybe i was wrong the shadow after the shower scene between her legs was blackish but it look muddy so he changed it to a color that was closer to her skin color yet now i think about its kinda worse anyway the audio does need some working the author is in the process of getting some more people for voices including hopefully some female voices since a lower tone voice is just not good enough. This series is based on a comic he made, which ive seen most of he's even has some of it on his website if you wish to see it. So basicly hes converting paper to flash, yet improving on his original strips. He even bought an anatomy book to study to get his drawings more accurate than the original. OKay I think thats about it hope you enjoys shani's work go check out his site.... its right by author
7
Well, it had violence, nudity, humor, and a plot. The voices need some serious work, I can tell you had to do them all yourself, but for an example, look at "no's" towards the end. They were so very choppy. The characters were drawn quite well, the bodies more so than the faces. I was honestly surprised by the shower scene, but what do you expect from a movie with Smut in the title? heh. Overall, a good movie. Will you be making a series?
Ryan
Excellent Movie, Nice Characters decent dialog =8
The story was somewhat difficult to understand, but I got the gist of it. Really great graphics, style, nudity, decent voices. That was really enetrtaining, and the last scene , noooo! reverberating sent chills down my spine. Two suggestions, 1) The mic recorded a lot of background noise when you are close, and that made it hard to understand, might tweak that, and 2) MAke more!
bostonsmiles gives you an 8 my friend.