Needs work
The flash wasn't too bad, but it really being a test I understand, but the plot was weak in my opinion, and the story was very slow moving, maybe becuase of the animation, but I found it a struggle to get through.
My first flash animation, done for a study in learning the flash tools.
Enjoy.
Needs work
The flash wasn't too bad, but it really being a test I understand, but the plot was weak in my opinion, and the story was very slow moving, maybe becuase of the animation, but I found it a struggle to get through.
good music choice
The only thing that would have needed improvement was the explosions. If this was your first, i forsee good things of you.
P.s. I sat remake the it or update it or somethin.
wow
Are you sure this is your first time? this stuff is really good.
((( NICE GRAPHICS )))
Cool art and graphics, like the jets from the into and the city, animation did seem kinda slow though, maybe speed that up and it should be fine, nice work though...
~X~
Just a 5?! This deserves a 6!
This is an incredible first movie. Hell, it's an incredible movie. It took me back to the days when I used to sit and watch "Top Gun." I still have the soundtrack at home.
My only complaint is that sound is needed: missiles firing, afterburners, explosions, etc. Other than that, great job! Keep it up! You'll go very far!