Its ok

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was ok, not great but ok, could have used more humor and more thought into it but for the mostpart it was decent stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think this flash could benifit from more humor, more stuff and jokes that really get you laughing.

~~OVERALL~~
notbad with this add some more humor and such

~X~

ehh

Very good use of sound and nice voicework, but that's about it, there's no real story here, well maybe in the opening text, but not in the animation itself, the dude, who is kinda poorly drawn just gets blasted by a dude who you didn't even draw yourself, so all in all it's not very fun to watch.

Not good

I see where you were going with this flash, alas it really did not work out. The graphics were pretty interesting, and the shooting part was done okay, but there were some problems. The intro went way too long, I was bored while I waited, that's never good. The kid just kinda walks, it hit with a ball, and that's it. You could have went way further then what you did, I think.

*Tuts* That was stupid

Some yellow thing gets a ball thrown at it, then it gets shot, then a bird drops a bomb on it, wtf? This was pointless, there was no reason for you to have made it and it was just a complete waste of my time, also the sound was irritating and neede lots of work.

I expected more

When I read the author's comment I thought I was about to see something deep and meaningful. How wrong I was. The animation was original and unconventional, some bits of it anyway, I'll give you that. BUT DUDE were you seriously expecting everyone to laugh at that poor little guy being victimised? Some people probably did, but I was angered. I don't know anything about you, but I wouldn't be surprised if you're racist man. Wait a minute I just had a thought, maybe you made it this stupid intentionally to portray how racism is so rampant in Western society.