Sometimes its less about quality...
And more about content/intent. Despite the fact you need to work on perspective, I definatly got your objective of this film. Being able to express your feelings about something like this with your music choice with a combination of the paintings, was wonderful. Too few flash are made with beautiful messages like this one and I hope to see that one day your skill has caught up to the desires of your soul and can truly capture how you feel about anything. That is after all what art is all about. I hope you keep on practicing because I feel that one day you could make a truly moving and beautiful flash.
This one was moving too but some of the perspectives and textures really took away from the feeling. I wish you the best of luck, honestly wishing I could express myself in art half as well as you can, and will if you continue to sharpen your flash skills.