Good, however, needs some help with grammar, graphics, and animation, other than that,I loved it.
Author Comments
i finnaly finished my second movie ever.
but as you may have read in the reviews already the spelling in this movie (and probably in this text) sucks thats because i'm dutch but i really am going to update this movie soon. if u want u can let me know in a review what exactly is spelled wrong.
in the updated movie i'll shorten some scenes too.
hope u like it anyway.
Excellent!
I can't wait to see the next episode of it! It was pure brilliance!!!
Everyone should watch this one! It should at least be in the top 10! .. Well.. in my opinion anyway
((( NICE STYLE )))
The art was awsome, very cool art style, nw if only more authors can do stuff like this, it did seem abit loud on the sound, but not that big of a problem, anyways nice work keep it up...
~X~
Not bad
The tecjhnical side (art, music, etc.) is superb, but the thing yous eem to be lacking in is your plot and direction. There's good plot potential in this no doubt, but as I watch it there's just something lacking in the events. Nothing to truly catch my eye, not ot mention the one word at a time narrative was a little annoying. Aside from that, a damn good flash
ok
nice graphics and nice music, but i didn't care all that much for the flash itself. i still give you a good score, review, and a 3 vote rating for your efforts and good music/graphics.