((( HMMM )))

Well it does need some work just little things alway improve, like more animated stuff like in the backround for a more realistic feel, but its fun to see, and was abit short for an almost 5 meg flash, anyways better luck next time...

~X~

Ha

It was funny but 2 short >:(

Eh.

Well, the graphics were not good, but the animation was better than the graphics. The voices were not bad, but the humming in the background was annoying. You might want to try and fix that. Also, lengthen the movie. Nice try though.

Very Scary Indeed

It doesn't matter what is said about this. I think that when you discover something like scripting your first flahs, try showing it to your friends. Do not submit directly to Newgrounds. I can't believe i found that somewht funny, but i am easy going. Again. Take that as advice, nothing personal.

to damn big

it was big and short

and no one wants a fat short chick

i think...ô_ô