((( NICE STORY )))
Notbad, you started it off with cool music, and the evil laugh at the begenning was a nice touch, i also like the castle backrounds, allthough they could have used some better detail and shading, the sticks as characters are ok but would like to see more character like characters...
The story was great and was interesting, the artwork does need some work aswell as the character designs, other then that i was impressed, hope to see more soon...
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