Excellent Graphics
This is a really good flash movie, you should be proud!
Author Comments
This is my first Flash cartoon so PLEASE be gentle! :)
These characters are based off of my webcomic, which is located at http://www.alsocoinoperated.com/
There's a few errors in this, I know (such as the 'Warhouse'), and I'll probably get around to fixing them sometime, but for all intensive purposes it's done.
A FILM FIT FOR A KING
I enjoyed this heartily. This movie has a BIG HEART, and is actually pretty well done. Your ability to convey so much without speech is fairly bitchin', to boot. The lightning flash and PUNCHLINE TAPIR elicited laughs from me. You should do this more often.
And come on, emo kids. You are supposed to have low self-esteem. You should be able to laugh at yourselves!
SLOW PACED
great graphics and such loved that type of thing in it but it moves very slow (yes i know the name is "persistance pays" but...) i had numerous urges to just stop and not give a review....but i watched it...liked the plans but i think the highlight was definatly th graphics
Only missing one thing
you should make him have a single tear trickle down his face when he sees the TV. lol gave you a 4
Ah this was sweet dude.
I enjoyed watching this, Brian. The funny thing was you didn't really need dialogue to understand what was going on. The way you drew the two main characters was pretty unique too, they sort of looked "Octorock" -ish from the Zelda series. Keep up the good work bro, you're on the right track.