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Balance Pencil

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A really fun game, just move your mouse to control the hand and try to keep the pencil balanced as long as you can. The preloaders doesn´t work with it, so be patient, because it is 2 MB.

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Fun but frustrating

I had fun playing it but if I had to hear "no,no,no,no,n,no"one more time I was going to throw my computer. Still pretty fun.

7/10

Pretty decent game you got there..usually balancing a certain object are simple games but you have showed that with improved graphics, the game can get even better! Also nice life-saver thing..helped me quite a bit!

Pretty funny

this is an ok game but the best part is when u drop it and the game screams no and like phrases

Some things to consider:

*the PENCIL, not pen, goes off the screen when you try to balance it, so that gets irritating

-limit the space in which the pencil can reside, so the pencil is more sensitive to mouse motion

*instead of focusing on the pencil, like the view should, I was focusing on the bar at the top of the screen..... so really, you could have had a game that involved only that bar and produced the same effect

-remove the bar at the top, if necessary, have a more subtle warning system

*the menu had "UNDEFINED" which means something was amiss, that should be removed or fixed

*the graphics weren't very pleasing to the eye, its an OK style to use, but I think it was overdone and too complicated.

- make a simpler hand, simpler pencil, etc. try to make it PLEASING

*the sounds were decent, still not very funny

-add some nice music, techno works with everything in flash :D :D
the voices should probably be removed, it gets annoying to keep hearing them

soyalexman responds:

thanks for the critic, it helped a lot, by now I have fixed the "undefined" thing.

not bad

that was a pretty good attempt for a game...

It was pretty good... I dont really like the sound you put into it... Its pretty annoying the no no no no no crapola and such... the pencil was alittle short and i dont understand how you can do a 360 with that... all in all it has the score it deserves it should be no lower or higher, so congradulations on this passing and keep up the work... What are you going to balance next? cats dogs cars???? hmmmm the possibilites...

-Jamie

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Uploaded
Dec 27, 2004
1:22 AM EST