this was awful

Amusing could use some more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was a neat little flash here, seems like if you did put some effort fourth ahead on this, but at the sametime you can put even more as it does have potential, I like that you had a little story here, The characters were ok but maybe you could make them a bit {LARGER} that way you could put more detail on them like the faces and such, instead of gradients use more shades and details, for stuff like the backrounds, also more detail on stuff like doors walls, you did show some nice detail on the trashcan, and then there is the {FONTS} you have an ok one but you should make it standout better with a differant style font maybe a more fancy one, now all these tips will only improve on your work here, and make it more enjoyble for all to see, so you do have an ok idea here just needs more effort to it, anyways good luck on your next flash works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the characters a bit larger scale and with that you can add some more detail like faciial and hands, also some more work on the backrounds would be nice also you are using alot of {GRADIENTS} try doing some shades and differant use of colors, and last but not least, ad some better or fancy fonts

~~OVERALL~~
An older flash but still amusing at the sametime it still needs some more effort.

~X~

meh

way too short, and the drawings and animation lacked significant detail. Not to mention the story was completely boring and typical. It wasn't terrible though so nice try.

not a game?

this flash would probably pwn as a game, but its not, so srry.
also, the animation wasnt so good.

Hmm that sucked

Some guys have a fight because a guy looked at his girlfriend then the guy who's girlfriend it was shoots him unfairly because the other guy was better in the fight, it just seemed completely stupid, there was no real story to it, it was just an excuse for pointless violence and it was very poorly animated.