Lol

that was great... Anyways, was that voice supposed to sound like Strong Bad from Homestarrunner? It sounded a whole lot like him.

great short, especially for your first!!!!

hey great short!! i loved the animation, great sound too, very funny shorts! i'm looking forward to the next ones!!

Great

Pretty clever. The graphics were good too! I think thhis cartoon should have scored better becuase the animation and the graphics were awesome. Next time make it longer, I understand how long it can take to make your first flash animation good job.

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Having a series of daily shorts does sound like a very promising idea, but being that you took 4 or 5 days to do it, or at least submit it, could make some people turn off from the series. It is a fun idea, and being that the plot of the movies are just about quick and zany happenings in the lifes of oddball characters, you can not really expect a whole lot from it, except for some humor and sillyness. The joke took a little to long for my taste, as the "jack-in-the-box" type thing was just still for at least 15 seconds, if not more and kind of made the time drag on. Your drawing style is pretty shaggy and gives an unfinished look - which is not all that bad since it is pretty original. The backgrounds were the best looking to me, especially when the moon came out. Good luck, perhaps make the voices a little better and add a background music loop.

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alright

not bad for your first flash I liked it... good stuff ... keep up the good work