((( NOTBAD FOR A FIRST )))
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all, and your first it was better them most first, also seems like its the only one you did, it has style and some depth to it, but you should still make more, you have potential for a great artist...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flash like this, more effort on the backend...
~~OVERALL~~
A great first flash still could be better but nice for a first...
~X~