it was good
And the voice acting sucked.... I couldn't hardly understand what was being said, and frankly didn't care... it wasn't the worst thing I've seen today... (that racist bunny video wins that prize).. but if I had any tips to give, it would be: have a point to the story.. show us something other than the motorcycle sprite going across the screen...
that was not voice acting its clearly a computer vocie and he did a nice job for a first god