alright
good graphics, could use better sound than a looping elevator beat, and could be a lot longer.
aside from that, pretty good
Author Comments
I submitted this once, earlier in the year, to get some feedback. I made a few changes based on that feedback.
Hope you enjoy it. Merry Christmas.
It is really short...it is a card.
it was good
the graphics were good but besides that could use some work but great job on it and keep up the good work
You made me chuckle and that's good
Your art was well drawn, your sense of humour is perfect. All you need now is a storyline, characters and some good jokes and you might just claw your way to a top submission. the music was well picked. I enjoyed it. You might want some more motion next time, but from the piss, I can tell you're good at animating. Excellent zooming in effect, by the way.
Why did the sky just... Stop.
That wasn't funny. The Graphics were nice but the way that the sky just kind of... Stopped at the top of the cartoon was just wierd and the music was depressing. Once again, the only thing that managed to claw your way to me voting "3" was that it was well drawn.
Merry X-mas!
reverendJ responds:
Thanx for the review.
I know it isn't as advanced as "Tree Designer" but I try ... those pesky drag/drop commands are so so tricky.
Good but,
with the nice animation, add some sound maybe like voices if you have a microphone, and make it a little longer, this definatlly ammused me 4/5
reverendJ responds:
thanx for th reveiw.