hmmm

this flash was too short, but you have a cool visual style, the gun would have looked better drawn and some of the other drawings, while pretty good, could be a bot better, but I think it seems okay all in all

okay......

the loop pissed me off and it was a little bit too deep and gothy.
im not insulting your flash skills, just your ideas, artwork, and concepts.

A point would have been good

I liked the whole start with the newspaper thing but that was it, the whole movie was just some guy breaking into a house and shooting someone through the head, why'd he do it? It really would have been nice to see some story to it, without it this was just yet another pointless violence movie, which aren't fun to watch, I like story.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

That was bad

You attempted humor but it wasn't funny because of the severity of the moment. Your animation was fine the story made no sense and the audio was strange. Try getting voices and a plot and it could bo much better.

Much ado about nothing

Graphically, it looked good up to a point, and then it all fell apart, especially in the second half. There was no discernable plot, and I'm pretty sure you ripped your audio without credit. Next time, write a plot, for God's sake.