Pretty good....
I liked the animation, but the story didn't really go anywhere. But it was still fun to watch. Good music, too.
Author Comments
Phil's Story was just a small project to practice some new technigues I learned using the tutorials found on this site.
I took out the stupid joke at the end.
Phil is a character I created. This story is about Phil, he gets ill and we get to see the battle that takes place in his mind.... sadly he dies. THX for watching. New animations coming.
Nice concet but no real story
I like the idea but it just doesnt have the meaning needed to make it a good yarn
The music was really annoying to
not quite
it seemed to be lacking alot of substance... maybe u need to plan what you want out better and put more into it.
needs work
you need alot of work, but your on your way. you also need more of a "battle" then "blarghh!" stand a bit and stab, die to make this interesting.
Okay??
Nice work, some spelling problems but it was readable.
The ending seemed a bit strange, fighting a monster then just standing there while he stabs you through the heart. It wasn't necessary to give away the ending in your authors notes.
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