Well...
to be onest, it was pretty crap. no storyline, some screens were on too long, and not a lot of violence like the name would suggest.
the music was okay but you could have REALLY improved the graphics.
zacfighter out. ;)
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A series of a hitman that is goign around to revenge his family as so can see this animation isnt extreamly good but im gunna work hard on part two this one was like a one night job...
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fix up your storyline.
bad spelling is a crime.
Was not good!
Okay, nobody wants to watch a video with a slow motion head explosion drawn out to be a minute long and take up 3/4 of the hole movie, nor does anyone want to read the script themselves, next time put some actual effort into a flash and get a dictionary.
PS: No one wants a sequel, dont bother.
Very substandard.
I am "sertain" that you didn't put in full effort for this flash. Spell check is your friend.
Well...
Good start at least, I would have added more animation, the black into scenes could all be livened up if it showed the guy sitting around watching his family in flashbacks or something.
I would have made the brain scene much quicker, sortof like CSI when they do a quick cutscene that almost startles you. This wasn't quick enough.
Finally I would have made the flash longer, and tried to develop a bit more character and storyline. It's hard to identify with a random murderer.