This is my first flash submitted to Newgrounds. I'm fairly new at Flash but I have been studying it for a while. This short is supposed to have a little bit of humor and seriousness. Any advice and tips are greatly appreciated.
~~ Thanks for all the great advice and comments. I will try to do better on future movies! :) ~~
Heh...
At first, I was worried about this flash. But man... I haven't laughed this hard in quite a long time. Cheers.
Animation: Good.
Style: Good.
Sound: Good.
Violence: Good.
Humor: I love this part. The burping, the suddenly "Oh... ok, I am ready. AHHH!" cut. Funny.
It is sad this flash has such a low score, it is better the most of the crap on today.
Really funny two thumbs up!!!
I like the plot a lot. And the end with like Darth Vader, Excellent.
nice graphics need work
Over all you have the right idea. You need to put more work into your graphics. You can get away with minimal if you do it right but your stuff was way too minimal and it made it seem kind of cheap. In flash, unless your doing fbf, you dont have to redraw the whole thing. Usualy just move the arms and mouth and eyes and such.
So if you put extra work into the back grounds (not a ton more but more) and on the characters themselves, it will look a lot nicer, with out all the redrawing. I'd get some one to help you on the basic drawing. Your animation and storyline were good, jokes funny. You basically got it. Now to spruce up on the drawing.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... ha...
THAT WAS FUNNY!!!!! The guy just stops and drinks juice its funny! Oh and nice Vader joke. I would like to see more of the Red Ninja, good job! But you could have shown more of the fight then this would be perfect.
it turned out bad
the voices were done well, and the animation so so. but what angered me was the short fight and the Darth Vader scene. just not funny anymore.
