Good art work
I would have to agree with what XwaynecoltX said. I have to say my self that this flash had good artwork and I encurage(spelled wrong) you to make more like it. JUST WORK ON SOUND!....!!!!.!
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This took about... a month and a half to make. Only because I only got 5 hours a week to do it, and I was still learning at the time.. I still am now. o.o; The blue haired girl is my own character. Her name is Kotai. The green haired one belongs to a friend of mine. His name would be Rai. This is really and excerpt from a little fiction my friend and I have been writing for a while.
Good art work
I would have to agree with what XwaynecoltX said. I have to say my self that this flash had good artwork and I encurage(spelled wrong) you to make more like it. JUST WORK ON SOUND!....!!!!.!
(( NEEDS A STOP ACTION CODE ))
~~REVIEW~~
This was a really good flash with some really nice artwork, especialy the characters, it was a fast paced animation and it was funny, the one thing i could suggest would be to add a stop action code and propper buttons, overall a decent flash if i dont say so myself.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should Add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash.
~~OVERALL~~
A very funny flash, but could use some fixing, nice work.
~X~
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I'm not exactly sure what that was about. I liked the characters, and some of the animation, and the fishing. But there wasn't much of a storyline, which I usually need in something like this, and the voices, no offense, didn't exactly match. Almost, but not quite there. I liked it though, and I hope to see more :-).
I'm actually quite surprised.
8 reviews! Well that's inane. Submitted today, anyway. True, I can't see much of a storyline happening with this one. No preloader (and hence, play button) nor replay button (and hence, finish to the movie). Somehow it remained quite smiffy! Hot anime chick, groovy. And cool anime dude with long green hair! Ooooo. Otherwise, there wasn't much to the movie than that.
Really, where was the story? The excellent animation saved this one from the portal, but it's definitely quite vapid. Cool anime though!!
~VelvetDarkRocks~
"whoopedy doo, she caught a fish"
it was cool, and the graphics for the people and the grass-trees were amazing, good job! maybe next time shell catch a bus? i dunno