It wasnt that bad

I would've liked it better if it wasn't giving the impression that it was going to be a Son of Magical Trevor's parody

It was interesting that you only used only sound effects instead of traditionally choreographing the movements to a song.

Good for a first flash, when using sound effects assign them to a separate layer and in the music properties, make it stream.

Also, when using tweens to shrink movie clips please don't use movie clips that change while they shrink/grow (the eyes blinking while they were getting smaller) it doesn't look right. (however this is apposed to the movie clip changing colors, now that is cool while it shrinks/grows).

It would've been all-around better too if the artwork were a little more better until the "paper world" came around. (like the environments weeble-stuff use)

I hope that criticism is constructive enough. 4/5 (not gonna be offensive, yet gonna give you something to aim for)

Ok first of all

Magical Trevor is songs in a loop not a stupid story like this and try adding a voice as well.. i give it a 4 (which is better then you should get)

stupid

ok,i think peice of crap,just doesnt cut it
try adding a voice

rubbish

trevor is about songs not storys so you just ripped it apart next time do your own animations

aw!

okay so it wasnt MT. but thats the idea-it wasnt made by weebl. i liked it for two reasons: it was your first, and you did well; and 2. it felt indie without the sound lol