an ok movie
you need to put more effort, in, make them move a frame at a time. also the same fire effect over and over doesnt really make flase seem powerful, put some more effort into building up his status b4 the fight
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Don't cry if it doesnt meet your expectations. This is my first flash submission, pretty much the first one i spent more than a day on. I've decided that there will be 4 episodes, then the final movie. Episode 1 is out, proud that it got a green bar. --This is only a DEMO--
an ok movie
you need to put more effort, in, make them move a frame at a time. also the same fire effect over and over doesnt really make flase seem powerful, put some more effort into building up his status b4 the fight
Will do of course. The only reason why it jumped right into it is because its a trailer, i didnt wanna make u watch a long ass trailer just to show powers.
Yay sticks
Your offer to respond to all reviews compelled me to write a good one.
The beginning graphics were amazing. I don't know how (or if) you did them, but they were good anyway. Even though this was a stick flash, I still thought the style of this was great. The plot is almost like my friends and me in a LAN party. Sound was good, violence would've been better if it had been finished, but was still well done anyway. Pretty funny, made me laugh a few times, but again, would be much better as a finished product. Overall, I gave this a 10 because I think you put a ton of effort into this (or if you didn't, are really good at flash), and the unfinished product came out nicely, even though there are a few kinks you should work out. Those are:
Make the sticks bob up and down slightly when they walk
Don't go overboard with the concept of a color gradient. You don't have to show the entire range of color; you can move the fill around.
Other than that, excellent work, and I eagerly await the future installments of this series :)
Really now, that was a good review i think. Yea, i did the beginning graphics. And ummm... so if i suck at flash it takes forever for me to do them right? this thing took, well a lot longer than a week haha. Well Thanks, i like tips on what i need to do, ill get on the bobbing right away and i'll remember what u said about color gradient. Yea, it's beginning is based on me and my 2 best friends so that's good that u caught it. Dont worry, the end result will have everyone smiling.
Sticks
How boring. A trailer for a stick figure flash. Obliteration is its name, and obliteration it deserves.
Stick figures, yes, normally extremely horrible and gay, except for Zhu's, But if i cant change your mind when the movie comes out. I'll just kick ur ass =D, j/king of course dont sue me.
wait a sec..
didnt u submit this before...and i asked what the music was...and u replyed..metroid!! yeah! i rememeber that! hi!
yup, im sorry you had to go thru the ridiculousness of watching the same trailer twice, i accedently submitted it again. Why hello there!!!!
lol...
well.. here's MY witty response to the person before me....
lol at your 1.30 voting power!! what a small penis!! XD
I like your witty response, i would've let you handle him but your 1.30 power desimated my insult. :D