This was my senior animation thesis quite a few years ago. I'm getting back into flash nowadays and I hope to have more soon. It's pretty abstract so not everyone sees it in the same way. Enjoy! Hopefully....
Woah!
^^Good Points^^
This was surprisingly very good. The graphics were very good. The drawings were abstract yet defined, and the animations were very smooth and very realistic. The way you added a three dimensional effect is cool. I was intruiged by the storyline in this, it is really quite interesting. This was very well done and I got quite some entertainment from watching it.
^^Needs Improving^^
I think this could have been longer, since it is so cool.
Oh!
The drama in the story! I'd like to see a series of those, for example one where we see how he got there.
Weird
That was pretty weird but I liked it, the animation was smooth, the artwork was great... you really know how to capture the expressions in your art! look forward to more!
Beutiful.
That was , amazing! The emotions of fear and surprize were exellently expressed by the foetus-like character.
The song went PERFECTLY with this ravishing animation.
I also liked the look on the character's face when it saw that second head appear, i felt it was like a "mom?" espression.
Am i right?
Looks good. But concept is hard to understand
I liked the look of it. Graphicly speaking it was very good. But I dont understand what you are trying to portray.