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^^Good Points^^
Looks like a random show of violence and FBF skills. I think you've got some good skills when it comes to animating sticks and violence. Everything was pretty smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, could use some sound. Violence is much more interesting when there is a good set of sound effects to go with it. Also, you've got a big screen, yet you only use about a quarter of it for the movie. You should definitely zoom in a bit and use the entire screen.

Woo

We all love violence, don't we, heh. It's a bit short, and it would look much nicer with a detailed background, but other than that it's all good, always nice with a little random violence now and then. Keep up the good work!

-cd-

Yeah this wasn't all that good

I dont even want to rate it man. come on now you must be better than this. I really don't know how any of your submissions are still on here, well other than that pico thing. this probably would have been good if it had sound and was a lot longer. Some of it was pretty funny but i mean seriously the lack of sound killed this one.

Uhhhh...

this stank purty bad....
it had no sound soo... yea...

Llike the last review said...

it was pretty funny!