This wasn't so good
This wasn't so good it seemed kinda short, make one longer next time.
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I apologise for the shortness... This is my second flash...Personally I don't think it turned out that well, the frame rate is too low and its too short, but regardless it is worth sumbiting to see what you think...
EDIT: When I look back at these old movies I know they're bad, but it's good to keep a comparison ;).
ehh
true the music was good but the animation was twitchy and didnt flow very well. plus the stick fighting has been very overused
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What can I say? Probably one of the worst submissions I've ever seen... the whole thin stick thing, the weird blood, shortness (heh), not enough of the weird blood, and the fighting looked more like hugging. Get some of them' tutorials or something, this needs a lot of work. It was funny how they were fighting thou, it really did look like hugging.
Sticks + Stipple = No
Up the FPS, make bodies thicker, DO NOT MAKE STIPPLE BLOOD.
Joeseye responds:
yes i know - i originally did have the fps higher but the moive went to fast...i will try to make it better next time
not bad
Practice your animation so it looks smoother. Also try and avoid the music overlapping, people will turn off the movie if they hear al lthe music overlapping it really sounds bad! :P
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