the second part of the first episode of my new series just a simple life. In this part things take a turn for the worse, enjoy.
*Better longer episodes coming soon*
(this first 2 part teaser is to see if people like the general concept of Just a simple life)
(( Nice animation ))
~~REVIEW~~
I liked it, it was random at times,a nd had some funny moments was kinda neat with a sorta story and all, very entertaining gave me a few laughs nice job on this, you should compress it somewhat though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a series out of this and compress the file.
~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and random, a decent flash.
~X~
thanks for the review man! It's good to here from the people watching, and good to see that i got a laugh from you!! I've been really busy at Uni recently and havent had a chance to make more, but it is in the pipe line! Hope to get another out to you soon.
Cheers
Alot of hard work
I can see alot of hard work went into this. Good art work.
Your script needs work.
The story was too lose and didnt really have a direction. They were at an airport then went to a graveyard? Didnt make sence. You needed a tighter script. And what connection did the undead guy that flashed in and out have with the guys?
You could have done this with some better dialogue.
You could simply add more dialogue to explain the story better with out alot of changes (except maybe where the dialogue is longer than the pics) and it will make it a much better flash.
You almost pulled it off, but not quite. I expect the next ones will be even better. Rember, keep it simple. Get too complex and the toon gets lost in the mix.
GL
cheers. taken into acount man.
Meh, pretty bad.
The voice acting and lip sync were terrible. And what was up with that damn zombie? Just way too mediocre to go anywhere right now. But if you polish it up it could be good.
Could be better
Your punchlines are somewhat poorly timed, and that fucking zombiething scared the shit out of me... but it's remotely funny, i'll havr to admit that...
cheers for the input. will be workin on more over the summer.