What it needs most...

Definitly a pre-loader, newgrounds has them for download so theres no excuse. Besides that...what the hell. Hey you made it, whatever.

i normally dont give that bad

the guy drawed was ok but all digital like and nothing funny or cool to me and further more (out to lunch at 9:16)

so disappointing

You can draw the guy shows that much, but I firmly belive live action should not be on NG, its for cartoons, not crappy low grade videos of things you can see on Itube, or tons of other site. I would like to see a flash cartoon from you, but I can't vote anything but a 1 on this.

What the fuck?

I thought the movie would have been cool, since that dude was drawn okay, but thwe sound of the guy sucked BALLS. and that didnt make sense. was that acatapult? A Rube Goldberg? Piece of crap flasH?

Im banking on 3.

Meh...

I dont like to sound harsh, but this isnt that good... You should have put more in there...