Cute

~~REVIEW~~
This was a nice animation, i only wish it had some color, it would really bring it out more, also you could add some subtitles, besides that it was a decent animation, nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, and Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute but could use abit more.

~X~

Okay,

very smooth animation, I'll give you that. The sound was pretty nice too. Allthough it could be a little bit more crisp and clear but meh.
The joke was a bit lame and that ruined the movie because it was very short.
You should definately continue this into a series but use colour and extend it more.

Simple

Very good drawing, although I suggest colouring, extending and maybe expanding on the San Fransisco joke (trannie?)

Ehh... Credits

If you put credits at the end, you got atlest put in what songs you used, now i like to wish to know what song you used at the credits, because you dident wrote that

WTF?!

the graphics are good. but...
WTF?!