jezz
This reminds me of most teenagers these days
falling in 'love' with people they hardly know.
love the animation and music<3
Author Comments
The story of a boy who is infatuated with a girl so much.. that he can't do anything else but think of her and attempt to win her over.
When he can't see her, or when he feels rejected, sides of his personality argue with eachother about the situation.....
(( nice storyline ))
~~REVIEW~~
this was good i like it more for the storyline, as for the graphics they were notbad either, the animation was good and it kept me wanting more, this showed alot of effort and detail, so nice job on this.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would love to see this continue somehow.
~~OVERALL~~
a good story nice animation.
~X~
Wow
This was good, you know. I felt kind of sorry for him though. He dies of love, of an inner fight in his head. You did a great job on showing what rejection from your true love is like.
In the end they all die
Well to be frank.....the devil did have more stronger points then the angel...the angel almost seemed like it was slightly retarded....
Anywho, they all die and no one wins anyways
CloseToGhost responds:
That's about it.
sound 2? lol
One-sided
while the animation was good, i felt the whole thing was sided with Devil, too much effort was put in his part, which ruined the balance of good and evil, Angel's reasoning was under par.
If you want a animation using conciousness' then you need to be able to balance the two out.
CloseToGhost responds:
You're right.
But at the point of writing it.. and the stage that the boy is in.. the devil's opinion was stronger. The angel's point was a lot stronger before all the boy had been put through. At this stage it's just the last shreds of hope and longing.
Thanks!