OK now I watched this too and need to give 5 Stars. Its good :o
Actually this bad sound quality makes it even funnier XD I like it!
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My very first submission on Newgrounds and my very first complete movie! I hope you'll enjoy it!
Let me introduce Jim Banana, a new hero of his own! He's cool but don't mess with him!
Archaein responds:
Well, I was pretty proud of it, since it was my first movie ever, even if the audio quality was crappy.
Mmm, quelle bonne salade santé !
Très belle animation ! T'es un vrai pro, je te félicite ! Super la passe de la banane et de la pêche, l'orange stupide, la piment rancunier et la patate nazi. Vive les fruits et les légumes ! Le guide alimentaire canadien recommande de 8 à 10 fruits et légumes par jour... présentement t'en a 5 facque t'es mieux de faire une suite pour que ton apport soit complet lol ON VEUT UN "Kill red peppers volume II" !!!!
Tite-totue
Archaein responds:
Merci, mais je crains que Pepper soit absent dans le prochain épisode (Si prochain épisode il y a)... En revanche, il y aura sûrement bien d'autres nouveaux personnages! Et je promet que Jim sera encore plus crade et badass que dans le premier épisode.
P.S. Ça fait un bail que je ne t'ai pas vu Tite-Totue. Si jamais l'envie te prends, viens discuter sur MSN.
Wow!
First off, let me tell you you have a really great series here.
I can't wait for more episodes!
The graphics were original and good in their own way, the characters were spot on (JIM Banana is one hardass), and the style was very original. The humor was raunchy, wrong, and hilarious. Most of the sound was decent however at times it could've been improved.
Just work on your sound and you'll have a superb series here. I loved every part of it. Really good flash.
I hope to see more of you. (HEY RATE MY CARTOONS TO!) : ) : )
~TheBeagle
Archaein responds:
Thanks dude! I'm glad you liked it!
Maybe I'll make a small series of Jim Banana... Maybe... ;)
Great ;)
This is a very good flash if it truly is your first....not sure what else there is to say :D
Oh and thought I found the intro sequence was a little slow...I liked the whole movie type approach you took with it. Guess it depends on the viewer.
Archaein responds:
This is my very first COMPLETE flash movie. I made a lot of unfinished crappy animations before, but never submitted on Newgrounds... ^^
Advice
ok, major advice here.
You are not making a blockbuster movie which people are going to pay to see.
When people pay to see a movie they are more inclined to sit through 5 minutes of opening credits.
You need to think of your audience.
I look through most the flashes here, and there are alot of really bad ones. So I watch as much as I can before making a quick judgement on whether it's worth my time and effort to continue watching or to just close it and move on.
So I found your extremely slow intro sequence to be pointless.
It did nothing to set a mood or theme to your flash, it was just clouds and really really slow text.
Why include it? It achieves nothing other than annoy the viewer.
Anyway, the rest of the flash was ok.
Archaein responds:
For sure my opening credits is a little bit too slow and boring (1m00 lol). Thanks for your comments!
