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Book-Man Episode 1 - A hero's tale!
The first Book-Man cartoon (re-uploaded) with better stuff all round! I plan to submit the whole series, so i best start from the start, enjoy people! Book's away!!!
not bad
the animation in parts is a bit sketchy but good facial expression in your characters.
However, more detail is needed in the simple things liek the baby being thrown, i didnt even know it was a baby.
Not bad, keep up the good work.
Cheers
P.s. get a manly voice to do some!
((( LOL FUNNY )))
~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was funnt and gave me a chuckle, so notbad there, the artwork could use more work though, it was funny in its a silly kinda flash even the voices were funny...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe different voices so that all the people sound different...
~~OVERALL~~
Funny and silly animation, could be improved...
~X~
I loved ittt!!
Make tons more, its the worst of the series, but hey, its the first one (a long time ago) sooooo looking forward to the last episode... but that will be sad :(...
Good.
i really thought it was better than the trailer lol.
The people didnt move enough .
Yet I liked the ideas and i liked the comedy.
Book man has a wicked ring to it. Wierd no one thought of it before.
hmm....
...What have you done bobby?
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THE GOOD
Well it was pretty long. And a nice thing makeing fun of superhero things. And at least you had voice acting.
THE BAD
You sound like a prepubescent 10 year old. And you are talking ten times to close to the microphone. Talk far away from the microphone and it will sound a lot better. And the graphics sucked. Most had no arms. How stupid is that for something that is barely even animated. And why the hell did you pipsince over their smiles. The smiles are supposed to be on the same layer you lip sinc on. And the lip sinc wasnt even good.
Thank you, even though you were very harsh i do admire your constructive criticism. I hope you know this toon was made a year ago before i had any good (flash) talent... if you call it that, anyhoo, i have 4 more episodes (Episode 5 in the making), so check them out!