allright

Very simple animation, which just needs work. Not much people will understand this, I'm afraid. Good job though.

Jurian

Could be better

Not bad, but I think this could still use a lot of improvements. First off, I think the plot wasn´t too original. It was pretty obvious that the movie was gonna end that way, which was too bad. It was kinda funny that she threw the brush in the pupil of his eye though :p

The drawings were okay. Not very detailed perhaps, except for the woman, but they were alright. The animation however didn´t look too good in my opinion. I think you need to speed it up a little and try to make it look smoother.

Also, the quality of the intro/outro music was pretty bad and so was the sound-quality of the voice. If you don´t have a better mic then I can imagine you can´t do much about the voice, but I´m sure you could change the music.

Overall 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. I think you still need some practice. For now, I would focus myself on animating if I were you. That seems to be your weakest point. Keep it up and good luck with any future projects.

~Auz, Review Request Club

Hmmmm

A small little animation, strange and perplexing at first glance.

The animation and drawing was a bit hit and miss, you seemed to draw the girl quite well, paying alot of attention to her details etc. But you seemed to skip out on the main character. This sort of inconsistency looks a bit strange, would advise to fix it.

The sounds was weird, I found the intro/outro sounded like it was recorded, and just sounded out of place. Would've liked to actually hear the song in decent quality.Other than that, the audio was pretty good, the voice was a bit weird but it was kinda the style ya wanted.

The story made no sense at all, just seemed to be an excuse to show some woman flesh. Needs alot of workm would've liked to see a little more effort put in.

Overall, the whole movie would be good, ya just need to iron out the kinks.

=Review Request Club=

Umm Alright

It's not too bad but it could definatly do with a bit of work, the main plot to this seems a little odd maybe, some animation leading up to what you have here would have been worth having and some of the graphics could be improved. The angle of the shower water I thought was a bit odd and the sound for it could have been worked at a bit, there was a slight pause in the sound at a part.

The music and other sounds seemed to be a little poor quality so try exporting it at a higher quality of audio as well as the choice of language here, if it was English, I would have been able to understand it better. Intresting idea but it needs more to it.

2/5

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= Review Request Club =

hmmm...

really wasnt that great and btw this entire site is in english so i bet very few ppl understood that, the only good part was when he got hit in the eye... until it turned pink and he bleed compleatly un realisticly. howevere your lines were very clean which is always a plus for me. and whats with the mucho stinko is that supposed to mean somthing related to the movie?

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