yea this is my fist flash its kinda av but i did it in one afternoon and its got some style.
Well ...
For a first movie, it really isn't that bad !!
It was very smoothly animated.
Now you might just want to add more colours, some real characters, a plot, and you've got yourself a very good movie, seeing how smooth the animation runs!
Keep it up and don't give up.
Small steps ... small steps.
ALEX
"more colours, some real characters, a plot" lol big steps 4 me but im workin on it whilst rockin my way through film school cheers man
slick!
that was great! i really liked the style.
the only two problems that i noticed were that i didn't even notice the music until the end, and since you had set your audio to Event (or Start), it kept going when the movie repeated (this also does horrible things to the filesize).
so fix up your sound and keep up the good work!
Interesting idea
Well, the idea is very original, and the characters are simple enough that we understand them imediately. My biggest praise is in your choice of music. It gave the submission a light airy feeling, like it was all in a dream (the white background helpped with that too).
Anyway, the only contructive critisism I really have of this flash is that you don't seem to end the sound file once the animation loop starts over. Besides that, it's a very nice first movie. It definitely shows artistic potential.
hey cheers 4 the positive review. in response to the music thing it did that but couldn't be bothered figuring out how to fix it as I'm teaching my self as i go. Also I'm glad to hear people liked the music, I whipped that one up myself :)
BAAAAD!!!
Two words: THIS SUCKS!
nice
better than most peoples first flashes. i hope it gets through :D