this is a trailer of a movie i will hopefully have up on Halloween but as people know sometimes stuff happens. i need all the suggestions you have to offer and if anyone wants to help me your welcome to, I need all the help i can get. but note this is a trailer not the hole thing. if you want to help, AIM me at Arrogantworm2004 or if you just want to leave a suggestion send me a message. be happy
good
well heres what i think, when you have the single tree moving to the left, you should have the forest(back ground) move to the right. second, you shouldnt stop the music right when it starts to get good(before he could finsih his word. make better drawings, i understand how hard it is making computer drawings, but try to use the tools more often. p.s. what was the song.
make the text better.
song blow me away. and thx for the suggestions. but i kinda made this a wile ago and my last computer no longer exists but when i find my disk that has all my old .FLA's ill improve it. thx for the improvements
good start!
I think u put a lot of work into this and it looks like a great start.
You should try working on your drawing a bit and some of the motion tweening was a bit overused.
Try googling and studying drawings of Death it will help with improving your drawing, but otherwise I think u have great start on the story telling aspect of it. keep it up man, let me know if you decide to continue on with this
well i think im going to continue but im not shore
Cool...
That was cool, try to make it by halloween! :)
ill try but im going to spend alot of time on the artwork and i mite not. but i am going to be optimistic and say it should be done by then
alright
This was decent, you've got a lot of potential for sure. Looking forward to seeing this one, nice job
thx, this review actually probably means im going to make it, i was thinking people arnt likeing it, there not going to like the full version i probibnly shoudnt make it but this kinda inspired me to finnish it.thx . be happy
Has potential...
This "movie" has potential, however; if you do not work your ASS off on the actual presentation, I am afraid it will be blammed.
It could have been alot better drawn, but I applaude your efforts.
You have your own style, which is very important, so that was the best thing about it.
The story... well it could have been a little more interesting. This preview was not really even a preview. Just a weird death guy walking/floating around some random place, and then finding a semi-crucified guy... Not too original.
So, unfortunately, this preview will be blammed.
But if you work really hard on the actual movie, well, it might have a shot.
Sevanimation
(You spelt Newgrounds wrong by the way)
im going to arrange you review in numbers.
1.really sad thing is i did work my ass off but i know what you mean next time ill put in extra hours just slitely touching things up or completley redoing things if im not satisfied.
2.ya I know, my artwork sucks really bad I am only skilled as a animator but im working on that.
3. my sister majored in art and when she saw it she said the same thing. i have my own style witch im happy to hear but sadly i dont see it. i have the same style in all my flashes i was also told.? but im glad other people see it im kinda proud of my style.lol. even tho i dont see it, atleast i know its there.
4. im kinda have no idea where im going to bring this flash i have a story idea but i think it sucks.
5.ya i know i just want some feedback on it. thx so much for the feedback and you really sound like you know what your doing send me a AIM and HELP ME , if you want i meen