You could have done better.

I think some of the backgrounds that were drawn without circles/lines were pretty good, like the mountains. So most of the background could have been better.
The characters looked pretty crap, big circular heads, small bodies, and no limbs. They were pretty bad.
Nice use of music though.

I think that the graphics were kind of boring, they didn't make me want to pay attention. The were pretty dull.

Overall this movie seems pretty bad. I gave it a 3/10 and a 1/5

Works

You've done a good job with this. Some hints on the way though: Try to add more detail to your graphics and try to make the animations a little smoother. This would establish a nicer feeling to it. Also there were some spelling errors, but not too serious, you could still understand everything. Well, nice work. Keep it up.

It's OK

But seriously, use spell check, turnament? Oterwise, work on graphics, and maybe have it progress a little faster.

plz....

take it upon urself to learn how to draw better flash. seriously, fucking now, its the only thing that keeps this flash from being great