that was hillarious!!!!!!!1
nice!!
that is pretty sweet
good job
keep up the good work
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Author Comments
This was really just a small project I did to learn a bit of Flash.
The gerbil and gerbil cage was part of a comic strip I drew up a couple of months ago and the audio bit was a goofy skit I recorded a year or so ago. I know full well that they don't quite go together, but it's still funny to see the image say those things.
Omg, enjoy it. =D
AidenOMG responds:
Thanks. =D
Great Short
The graphics were great, but it was pretty short. It's ok to me because my flash movies are very short.
((( FUNNY ANIMATION AND NICE GRAPHICS )))
~~REVIEW~~
Hey now this was good, especialy the graphics, allthough some more animation would have been cool, it was funny so i like the humor, and i could see this as a series where the gerbil talks about his owner from the cage and all, anyways funny stuff...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes, like maybe he escapes, Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash
and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...
~~OVERALL~~
Great character good humor. this one has promise, keep up the good flashwork...
~X~
AidenOMG responds:
Thankies for the feedback. On my next project I'll use subtitles, it's a smart idea. =)
It was ok.....
Because i saw potential in the flash i protected
it.......
End of story..........Not because i'm caring....
Nooooo sir,
And for your info,keep it up!
~Slience~
AidenOMG responds:
Oh my goodness, you caaaaaaare! XD
not much but a start
since its your first one I'm going to assume your still learning how to make flash. in that case its not bad, the sound was clear, the gerbil's mouth moved. but try for something bigger next, don't get stuck making short clips like this.
AidenOMG responds:
The short was actually the first time I've ever touched Flash, quite a learning experience.
I'll definitely try to do more on the next one, this one was just a feeler.
Thankies for the feedback. =D
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