so funny i love it
All i can say is "let a fat man decide"
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This is the first installment of a new series called "the lab" the next installment will have the rest of the backstory and it will finally get into some action! tragically, i havn't started that yet. and i'm pressed for time... It may be considered boring without much sound but i'm just not really good at producing accurate sounds... this is my first flash, so please take that into account. or not :) your choice. it may be confusing, but if you watch it a few times you'll get it. tell me how to fix it. :) if you think a part should be taken out, comment exactly that. give me feedback =D all of my animations are complete with the exception of the credits. thats in case someone wants to help me out with sound stuff. thx
luenatic responds:
:D I was really hungry when i did that part.
it was...good.
it was good, but man, when i was at the choise scene, (it was a good idea), but you should make the letters smaller, because they were caughting the SCREEN ,and you should make them move faster.i mean, when the one series of words was dissapearing, the other was coming after one minute.so, do this in order to make them move faster.however, good try, even if the scenario wasnt original....
luenatic responds:
Yes, i was debating whether or not to even have that section in there or not... I may remove it. thank you tho.
No sound
I liked how you gave it a sorta krinkel's look with the floting hands but thier was hardly any sound remake it with more sound and i'll see how it is then
luenatic responds:
yeah i was looking for a good bg music to put in at first but i couldnt at first, than i just wanted to see what response my animations would get. I actually tried to do some sound effects at first but my microphone sucked and they didnt sound good.
Sorry, i had to "0" it...
The graphics were actually decent, but it killed you to not have any kind of backround music or sound. Maybe if you retry the same flash and add some music you will get better results.
luenatic responds:
That is what im almost positively going to do, i'll need to find someone to help me with sounds and background music. Thank you :)
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