kinda dumb

no choices...no variation

hmmm

animation good, story bad. me agree.

Ummm

Maybe a little variation in the future. Kind of lilke a pick your own adventure type thing, not always ending at work. Though that would be tougher to program. The animation is good though, story is lacking.

it was alright

i think you could have made it more challenging It was a bit too easy. but the animation was good

What is this??

You might have skills for animation (raccord and all that is quite good), but you certainly don't have eye for game making. This makes no sense! Make movies, not games.