You're 22?

I'm sorry, but the sheer quality of the submission, combined with the stupid if not unprovoking storyline really dosen't cut it in my eyes. I'm willing to look over the poor quality of the graphics, but the storyline alone is just terrible. Next time ask yourself "Is this story thought provoking, does it make people want to watch my submission?" Nonetheless that's really the only thing that I find to be wrong with the submission. But even though it is the only thing, it's a major thing that needs fixing. Poor submission.

LOL Paper Stop Motion

THis actully made me lugh because, Lavalampa said its Paper Stop Motion and I started to
lugh when I saw it.

I've bleed out better.

For effort, you get some credit, but, I'm sorry to say, but this just blew some submissions out of the water. For one, the art was alright, but the movement was like SouthPark. That is paper-stop-motion. You have a more advanced program that could do more then that I assume. The voice acting wasn't very convincing, it wounded like you were trying to be quiet so no one would hear you. Both voices were the same, also. There were a few glitches in the movie, but hey, thats all flashes are, a giant glitch. Good effort, how this got through the portal is beyond me.

Not good...

So a horse call Clip with super powers, being shoot at by a guy who sounds like a 9 year old with some kinda weird weapons armoury... wtf dude?
Next time you've gotta use a better story line and try to make guns that actually look like guns!!! I thought the grenades were exploding turtles or something?!?

"Actually has voice acting"

Well it sucked bad. Sounded like you squeezed your voice on that guy who can't move his legs. All I saw was clip shooting him. Then the fucked up looking guy goes in a shitty weapons shop with shitty weapon art. That's when I stopped this. I hated it, Didn't like it. Probably I missed something good but if you made the guns look like guns and not some pre-k art, maybe I would have continued.You could have atleast named this something better. 0 and 0.