Actually pretty good.
Id like to see this finished. So far, its really unique with good action. Not just the average flash fight, Nice job.
Author Comments
This piece was supposed to be part of a collaboration about 9 months ago! They left me hangin' so I decided to post up the part I did. I did this short in a very short amount of time. It's was mostly traditionally animated which takes longer than symbol animation.
Don't know if I'll ever finish this what you guys think?
WARNING!: Loud audio hide your dogs and cut your grass!
Okay let me further explain the situation on this piece. I did this piece in a matter of three weeks, that was the deadline, during school which didn't leave me hardly anytime to finish this properly. Since this piece is traditionally done every frame had to be cleaned and colored which if you look at the characters not a simple task.
That's why this piece isn't done to the fullest, sorry I have a life geez!
Too short and confusing.
Ok, so I am new to newgrounds, and after looking at several shorts, they all have a begging, middle and end. It seems like after looking at all your pieces, your stories are all confusing and leave us hanging. The intro stating, "Did it really have to come to this?" Well, what is this? Are we supposed to know know what is going on. It would make sense if there was a part 1 to this. Is there a part 1? I don't know these 2 characters, nor do I care for them. Who is the protagonist and who is the antagonist? I don't know who to root for. Animation is great, but let someone else handle the stories.
nice!!!!!
i was hopping it last more than 2 seconds, but overall good. no really its a bit to short
Few problems
Well for starters, make the jackets/capes blow in the same direction as eachother. Also, make some sort of story, something to make it make sence. But still good.
pretty dang good
this looks like its going to be one hell of a fight. cant wait to see it and i hope the entire thing is going to be as good, or even better, than what you have shown us so far. very, very nice cliffhanger. way to build the suspense. hope to see the continuation soon.
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Daily 4th Place March 19, 2008