Not bad
But I have to agree with the guy down there. Only if we speak your dialect can we fully understand this game. See, down here in Arizona, USA, we would say (as phonetically as I can get it) "Lorn Stoo-wert," not "Lawn Styoo-ert" and "Lahnch to it," instead of "Lawnch tyoo-it." Where I come from the dialect allows for such differences in pronunciation, whereas your doesn't seem to, so to us it sounds more muddled than it would to your neighbors.
The game was still interesting though.