Wow! Much better!
I love it. The animation is better, it's longer, and it's narrated. Wonderful.
Author Comments
My second submission. It's more or less the same story like the first one, but better animated. Thank you all for the reviews. I hope you see my improvement on this one...
This time with sound. (Sorry for my english - it's not native as one can hear)
Again: Tell me what I can do better!
7/10
Kinda good, had a little giggle at the end. It was somewhat entertaining, just work on the backround a little.
Good
That was good, I liked it :)
Not bad
I'm not going to complain about the English but I am going to complain about the sound. I had to turn the volume up all the way to even determine that there was sound in the movie. Fix the sound volume and it should be fine.
Great!
Wow balls is so lucky now he has his WINGS! Yay! Keep it up! He also shouldn't killed himself too lol.