better than my expectation

eric told me, "hey, my bro made a flash and surprisingly it passed!"

so i watched it

it's pretty horrible actually

but it was way beyond expectation

u actually had music and colors in there

i herd yer first flash was two dots going bak and forth

wow, it actually had humor too

but the ending sucked

if i was you then i would get the guy the kill the other guy for whatever reason

my advice to you is literally be yourself

i'm serious

u hav a funny character, y not use it?

Nonsense

I now it's no easy to make flash, but there is a lot to work with graphics, speech or more audio. I got bored.

Horrible.

Alright heres the deal, this flash needed a couple of things such as sounds effects, background music, better graphics, and voice overs. You really need to work on your graphics and your sounds. Get some sounds off the Newgrounds audio portal or on flash kit, there are hundreds of sounds that could've helped this movie. Also, improve your drawing skills, practice! The movie could have been funny if it wasn't so slow paced and if it had voice overs too. I.E. I got really really bored while watching it and I couldn't wait for it to end. Do better next time!

-Don_Anonimo

haha

cool

eeeeeh

it was okay. but it wasnt that good either. The doors are backwards also.