Great music video.
Customized too with the great animation as an actual music video just in animated version but overall i really liked it and made me think of some things,nice job and keep on doing good.
Author Comments
A reflective story about a guy in a broken relationship who finds the ability to move on, while riding a subway.
I've been working with the band Plush Society to make this animation a reality. I've been working on this animation for quite a while and become a fan of this Phoenix-based rock band.
I've been working to perfect my animation skills and I've learned a lot while working on this video. Please feel free to critique my animation. I appreciate your suggestions.
very good but...
i like the song and animation! art could have been better but overall i liked it 4/5
Cool
increase fps
4/5 8/10
Good but...
give the stuff more texture then it will have a better depth feeling(for example at the beginning the zoom into the subwaystation was just so flat same goes for the subway itself).
Just try to kinda add some impurifications like scratches or graffiti on walls or surfaces and give stuff like the pictures on the wall a slight kurve on the edges with a shadow.
But I liked the syncronisation and the Idea itself
hmm... nice try
great but some parts are just plain bad
the animation often looks flat and often the faces n guitars are missin stuff
try harder and you'll get smthing!
Kaishu responds:
I have to work on shading more and I'm going to do that with the next cartoon I'm working on. I was working for a long time on the line work in this video. I was drawing with a tablet, but when it came to coloring it took even longer. Thanks for the advice!