Not too sure but...
She jumped off the cliff, and she didn't know how to use her wings, and she thought she was flying until she died? So for the rest of her life, she did live how she imagined.
Author Comments
Got a random urge to make an animation about a girl who wanted to fly.....
this took about 12-13 hours to make. The ending is rushed, sorry about that. I do plan on creating an actual ending at some point though.
so yeah... enjoy
tragety
i would have liked a shaksperian ending...but good none the less
The ending was fine.
But you can change it if you want. lol
The music flowed so well I hardly realized it was there. I usually like serious flashes this was no exception.
My advice o you would be to make more. Maybe, do some voicing for a couple flashes. There's always room for improvment and your already decent enough.
Now, if you can make a comedy too. Then you will have your work cut out for you.
4/5
RB
well
nice flash but the end...? at least you could show her flying and/or how she sees the world from above.
hard to judge
its so hard to judge a piece that doesnt involve some kind of dirty joke or gratuitous violence...i was hoping the bird would eat her.. :(
you could have done something with the typography though... it was dull and boring, bringing down your choice of animation style.
